The first page of Whitman’s notebook displays five different
ideas or pieces of information that are all separated with lines in between
them. There is also a stamp about mid-way down the page. On the second page,
the word “brochure” is written big and clearly on the top of the page. This
brochure is to have a dialog between two people, one of which being the “president
elect” and is involving lessons. The third page is slightly messy and hard to
read, but Whitman has a lot of things crossed out, showing his change in mind
over the particular subject. Words that I can pick out include, “religious”, “crash”,
and “question”. On the next few pages he goes on to discuss the Queen of
England and the Queen of Spain. With this, Whitman is perhaps talking about the
effects that religion has on being a leader and having power. Following this is
a description of a ship of the World, Humanity, of all Ages, of Promise that he
welcomes with joy. Next comes several drawings of men that all look rather similar
when it comes to the long beard, bushy eyebrows, and messy hair. The first
picture is just a profile of a man’s face, the second is the same but with his
hand reaching out, and the third man is in a tall hat. The last drawing is a
purse or satchel-type bag. Whitman then draws a sign that reads “The Bohemian. Saturday
Press” and writes a poem about Brooklyn. The last page is picture of a skeleton
head with a sword through its heart. This is perhaps the man on the last few
pages after his heart was broken.
The first page of Whitman’s notebook is actually a list of
different addresses with lines that separate them. Following this is a made up
conversation between him and Lincoln, although they never actually met in
person. The next section displays Whitman’s views on religion, as he proposed a
four-sided version of God, which included Christ and Satan. In Whitman’s wish
to show that freedom can be extended, he wrote the poem, “Libertad”. He later
added to word “perhaps” to the poem to add hope. Whitman also uses the phrase, “and
you”, representing an unanswered thought. This brings in the thoughts of the
reader to finish the conversation. At this time, Whitman was facing with a
mid-life crisis. The sketches at the back of the notebook were said to most
likely not have been drawn by Whitman, but are actually pictures of Whitman. The
last poem in his notebook discusses the Battle of Brooklyn with George
Washington. What I believed to be a bag of some sort was actually a harp, a
symbol for poetry. The skeleton on the last page was said to possible be an
allegory of America itself in the transition of life to death. Whitman's ideas
displayed throughout his notes, poems, and sketches show how creative he was and
his strong ideas about the future. These ideas were about America's leadership
and the condition that America was in now. By related to America's depleting
success, Whitman was perhaps tying it to his own mid-life crisis by the many
allegories he creates.
Great analysis- loved reading this!
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